ho!
one of the most important thing you would like to know and
im been somehow harassed--XDD
is bout the fancomic(Susu!--that later on i realized that i comited another typo!---cuz it was mean to be "Suzu" which means "bell")

i just realized that i cant continue it
and i cant continue promising that one day
i will do the next pages--so i write what it will
come next--and will resume what was going
to happen on the second chapter

so from this page:
[link]
comes this
(and beware of my english--even if i corrent this already):

(...)
Naruto was sick of it
he wanted to help her so bad--She seemed
in so much pain...
so why she wouldnt show him her injury?
Raged he attoned to grab her jacket from the side
and ripped it

and saw it

slowly and silently he posed his gaze on what she was hidding

his eyes grew wider and his hand clentch the fabric on his hand

Hinata was scared of what he had done so she didnt covered
the enormous scar she got on her stomach
Big claws crossed her pale skin and vivid flesh covered
with bandages

So he knew..He felt guilt..Again
he caused so much grieve and suffering to the ones he loved

She swallowed and hesistage to speak
"It--s Its not your fault"--she said strongly

Naruto stood up slowly--He didnt raise his head always looking at the floor
and tightening to the piece of cloth he had on his hand

"You said you liked me"--Mutthering Naruto looked like he was reuniting strenght
to liberate all that he had stabbed on his heart

"..but"

"HOW COULD YOU SAY THAT!LOOK WHAT I DID TO YOU!
im a monster..."


Hinata managed to roll over her chest and look direcly to his eyes
"No! you are wrong!-You...
...Naruto kun I"


Cutting words violently--an enormous lighting cut in half the wood of the
rooten tree where they hide

They looked up and found many shadows-smoke and ashes dissipated showing that
they were some Anbu members that could walk after the incident

One of them took his mask--His face was expresionless-the big rain drops
washed his face meanwhile he looked at Naruto

All of them where looking at him now

The Anbu said one sentence strongly
You will come with us...

Naruto muttered weakly
Yamato-sensei..

He looked down--closed his eyes
then he turned to see the girl that was on the floor
weakly trying to move her head to face him




NEVER!!
He shout and a vicious red aura paralized everyone

Hinata who was aided by Yamato let her tears roll over her face
Her claims and shouts were silent--No one could hear anything but the
howl of the beast that naruto carried into him
and in a blink of an eye
he dissapeared


YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!
Hinata screamed then tried violently to liberate from
Yamato s embrace-
He didnt let her go and watched her how she struggled to
move
she fall on her knees and rise her head to the sky
she let the rain wash her sorrow
but it was so deep be taken away


The sky was tormentous everywhere--Even that far away from Konoha
He was all cold and wet sitting on a rock near a river
Looking his hand whom was still holding something
Hinata s cloth?--he thought--he slowly opened it and
took what it seems to be a little piece of wood--it had a red
ribbon on the top and in the center it had a bell
the big drops of rain made the bell sound

He lowered his head an placed his hands over his face
He let the rain wash his sorrow
but it was so deep be taken away


End of chapter 1

ho--i think i will write the second chapter resume in other journal

Sorry to keep you waiting all long for this-
I know you want more and better things from me but
this is all i can give you bout my lil naruhina story

so thank all of you for reading it



in other things
Today is an special day for me just figure it out --it aint too hard to tell what day is today--XDD

before i went for some vacations--two friends provideb me with some amazing DC comics
i fell in love with arkham asylum!---i will save to buy one copy
also Mr punch from gaiman+mckean is awesome
im reading watchmen and two batman s dark knight comics...i read also the killing joke and was great--the joker is an amazing villain so twisted and crazy--i didnt realize it till i read arkham asylum--in my head i only got the good old references of batman tv series movies cartoons etc..

also i bought from my friend my own nintendo ds!
sacred ode to the vicium--
i think the best portable playing console is the ds
if you had played hotel dusk, zelda or other games that are
well thought(i mean this cuz there are games for the ds that doesnt
take the best of the console)you can agree with me that
you can play with the whole machine making it incredible interactive


btw my chetty dolls that i ordered last year from ebay arrived
i took some photos of them!



thats all!

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